THAT'S MY GIRL! Great job!I like your hook. so hyper. and it's unique. It somehow kinda fits your personality too. lol. very entertaining.You have lots of good transition words. I also like it how you don't repeat words that many time in your essay. GREAT JOB! :]
I like it! :)
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THAT'S MY GIRL!
Great job!
I like your hook. so hyper. and it's unique. It somehow kinda fits your personality too. lol. very entertaining.
You have lots of good transition words.
I also like it how you don't repeat words that many time in your essay.
GREAT JOB! :]
I like it! :)
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